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Thursday, 25 June 2009

Equalized

It flies without wings
Faster than sound
Life or death it brings
The fall of the crown
In revolutions it spins
Imperfections cut away
No capacity for sins
It has nothing to say
A blast with a twist
The turmoil quelled
Brandishing the fist
The fallacy dispelled
Slandered beyond measure
A fight for the right
Concealment and treasure
Held firmly and tight

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at first i thought you were talking about disease...
- 6/23/2009 10:44 AM
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that was well written!
- 6/23/2009 10:52 AM
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excellent
- 6/23/2009 10:53 AM
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Good writing Randy!
- 6/23/2009 10:56 AM
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Good Luck!

Good one, monsieur!
- 6/23/2009 4:51 PM
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Like moth to a flame...

wow, this is an awesome poem. thank you for sharing! :)
- 6/23/2009 5:09 PM
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good words there mornin glorie....
- 6/23/2009 5:36 PM
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tres bon . . . J'ai aimé cette
- 6/23/2009 11:27 PM
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@adventofreason - Dang you and Vanessa do me in with that there frenchy talk!
- 6/23/2009 11:36 PM
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@thekeyhole - Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you liked it!
- 6/23/2009 11:36 PM
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you are so cute. : )
- 6/23/2009 11:37 PM
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@mlbncsga - Thanks for droppin by there, mornin glorie!
- 6/23/2009 11:37 PM
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@RDRRain23 - Thank you, sir! I appreciate it!
- 6/24/2009 12:27 AM
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Poetry! Nice one.
- 6/24/2009 1:45 AM
- murisopsis (message)
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Lovely imagery.
- 6/24/2009 1:52 AM
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@murisopsis - @booksnstuff - Thanks, y'all!!!
- 6/24/2009 2:17 AM
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I like the way your poem reads, Randy.
Kathi
- 6/25/2009 2:16 AM
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@Still_groovy - Thank you, Kathi!!
- 6/25/2009 2:26 AM
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One of your most interesting, methinks.

~~Blessings, prayers 'n cheers
- 6/25/2009 3:12 AM
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Nice word flow, my brother. Love it!
Kaz
- 6/25/2009 10:49 AM
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Makes me think of a gun going off. I like it, I like it!
One week 'till Michigan! I can't wait!
- 6/25/2009 11:45 AM
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Just saying hey... came by for another read...
- 6/25/2009 11:28 PM
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Nice rhythm and rhyme, Randy.
- 6/26/2009 9:05 PM
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